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#1471    They told me to go to Reverent Park.
The thorns are off there. So no.
The scene is off there. No go.
Wherever I'm at. No show.
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#1472    Just standing, with milk on scarf.
Like misspelled words from me to me.
Too-far from a mirror.
But not "too far from" the sea.
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#1473    Extra-Clues "opening" a bakery.
Where "people" can always win.
A chance to phone "themselves" for fun.
And hear their-sage within.
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#1474    Doing it for caviar.
Vomiting just the right "say".
Place setting the retractable table.
So good-saints go away.
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#1475    In the corner of "a stand for it".
I'll give a hint, there are mountains.
Which I'll show you when "someone" wants you.
And mega ice storms, turn to fountains.
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#1476    You "even" bought a car "The Legend".
The rough-open-sea said flat.
With eight perfect "movie" cylinders.
And true, "Wait I'll second that".
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#1477    And "this" is your first handicap.
Looking around the room.
Here are the first choices.
But forget about the broom.
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#1478    No successors walking out the doors.
Getting no "answers" science roars.
Ok that's enough fighting "please".
Answering "that" the monkey screams.
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#1479    And this is where you'll stay.
I've already set-up-shop.
Restrictive clothing of course.
And Saturday's, full stop.
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#1480    You guys? Is this how.
We're supposed to do it.
Arresting me now toe to bank.
That-whatever oh sweet shoe fit.
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#1481    Junk should be piled on.
And swine the "image" some.
"Expensive" street no longer.
Not going to happen. Done.
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#1482    Know what at unheaven savors.
And hums the slightest air.
Just once upon a clock of haven.
And the thirst becomes so there.
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#1483    Am I not going to take this anymore?
You know that shoes can do that right?
So yes I'm knocking him, is that so wrong?
The fifth question being, who listens to mom?
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#1484    No doctor said here's the problem.
There's too much attention in your wrist.
That stuff grows like tension mention.
Or wars like mouse hand dissed.
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#1485    Negativity requires a different age.
And a "host" of implant burgers.
Raglan-One. Admit no sun.
I hear that herders-murder.
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#1486    Two newspaper stories side by side.
The combination makes them three.
The way a personality comes from.
The bumps that make a key.
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#1487    To stand on that dam between rich and poor.
Where money is water in the dreams of doors.
With its cold as old as self permissions.
The world only sells them thought partitions.
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#1488    Everyone crowd around some more.
Listen for-the-smile from pensions.
Yes my mother talks to me.
So I-have-really-good attention.
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#1489    It's actually a very big event.
People who use "discoveries".
Mighty cold or mighty hot.
I assume you'll have-warm-butteries.
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#1490    Wallop a noun into the eye.
Actually there's "just four sizes".
I'm finished my homework mum.
Then-the-billy-goat canceled prizes.
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#1491    I was going to ask, does he paint houses?
And are these "doughnuts" nearly-day-old?
The Tardis alone might fetch some-goods.
But that's no excuse, for manners.
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#1492    Look at that. There are monkeys here.
They "work" from nine to fabled!
Anything's better-than almost supper!
Onions are so un-labeled.
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#1493    Around one o'clock now. Feeling stable.
Like surface tensions around the dock.
Four months now. So-unable.
Almost near the speed of-mock.
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#1494    There's a hole in this city!
We were-so traumatized by-it".
Almost five "fire-truck-sponges".
Sponges were ordered, because sponges fit.
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#1495    Because all of us are "woven".
Because the "crisp is air".
Because of "absent-mindedness".
I don't have a joint-account to wear.
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#1496    That's a tube of vacant spine.
Vector nine, vector niner!
A mouse did that to you?
Which-word hit your shiner?
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#1497    Very-very slow now.
Take it from the "mop".
Hideous? We-will-ask your navel.
Hey! Who billed for "one deep thought"?
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#1498    All this darkness "must-implode".
Get out, "get out of here".
Do we need-this-orange?
Hello? We're loft impaired!
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#1499    One "giant-yellow".
To shock the "shiny shoe".
Slow down, slow down, slow down!
The major-piss is due.
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#1500    Wow! All that coffee talked allot!
Who knew that's-what-years could-do.
Polynesian-Sunrise eh!
Yea we have those-too.
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