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#691    Oh, not that again.
That's not the way it's done.
I don't know what this is.
The wish to know someone.
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#692    It rhymes with climbs and dreams with seams.
And it's safe as money and just as funny.
Have you ever longed and missed a metaphor?
With all my heart that's what my clever's for.
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#693    You're not going to open up.
Take it one step further.
We don't want you on the carpet.
The taper today, said heard her.
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#694    Because you were asleep.
Rockets, oh my god away.
An introduction without the happiness.
Place your bets and day.
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#695    Your chimney, is corrupted.
I know because I stare.
If harbors have erupted.
Please forgive my shadowed air.
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#696    I would dear a woman carrying no purse.
Who's cargo pants maybe are not stoppable.
Near man's wrist bending upward indicating stop.
In the most manly fashion possible.
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#697    Small "woman" watching large dinner plate?
At centre of "exponential" spread of dark dots.
Man background, woman foreground, holding viewer's shoulder.
Asking "do you know"? "It's all just circular thoughts".
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#698    A soldier rests a moment, to write a letter.
Then notices he has some very bad wounds.
My, but you sure have a lot of nice china.
Would you mind very much if I choosed?
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#699    Shinny shines without us.
Just turn thirty, then compare.
Then you'll have to, for a couple of months.
Be crazy about her hair.
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#700    Now I understand painting.
It works fluidly like self finds self.
Like dreams "form" up against other dreams.
Adding details, "moist" eyes will help.
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#701    Forever told you the answer.
Eliminate the steam.
Look I'm holding everything.
It's hot and old as dream.
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#702    Please, please, please. This is about the smarmy.
Here "inside" your head like speech.
All I need is-to hear you breathing.
Target "You've Got-Lots Just-Teach".
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#703    There you go. Take a few steps back.
Why waste such-a toxic lore.
Of course young man.
We have seen all-men unsure.
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#704    There's something in it's bathroom.
First-words from out it's mouth.
Yes we sponsored him.
And offered mountains to his Health.
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#705    It must have been a mother machine.
I'll really need you to solve this-one-Weeps.
No good. I already asked him about pastrami.
Lord knows how this-one beeps.
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#706    C.e.o. leaving disabled employee.
In the lobby facing windows.
Saying "keep up the Good-Work receptionists".
Then returning to important symbols.
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#707    Attractive man and attractive woman.
Sharply dressed in white.
Running extras "fast" in city.
Where starting-signals bright.
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#708    Worried priest asking local woman.
Why did you quote me thus.
While laying on top of her under a stairwell.
Head against the morning rush.
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#709    I met John a little bit.
His medication is in a storm.
Is he ok?
Two minutes left till warm.
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#710    What happened?
Lions from above.
Mildred in the afternoon.
Push one-button love.
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#711    End justifies the means.
That's evidence for the lab.
Wow, never once entanglement?
Yes microwaves are that sad.
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#712    Price Pockets.
And then look towards the vast.
Standing on the nothing much.
Just a few interests built to last.
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#713    We are stronger than we think.
To pass and pass and keep.
And thinking stronger than we look.
The safe in which we deep.
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#714    Two pool-table installers.
Repairing cloth under warranty-work.
Do they think it's paid for.
Secret wink for secret smirk.
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#715    Just the payments. Quick as possible.
I like the Labrador.
Are you throwing money at us?
So that's what homes are for.
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#716    That is not your hat.
That is not your town Fedora.
Inspector I have solved the case.
He longs for his ignorer.
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#717    Now listen here denial.
You're a master of the neocortex.
But we like people! Just like you, just like me.
Poor people, if you just let them be.
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#718    Listen. You are going to need another one.
And yes I know we're pigs.
But that's just the way it feels.
To map a device, and get pulled in.
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#719    Like dust before, and dust after.
The dustpan shows no find.
My mind holds, your only rafter.
Somewhere high, as kind.
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#720    Like reaching down into a vowel.
To feel for a single we.
I can never predict, that when I miss you.
Eyes will perceive not see.
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