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No doctor said here's the problem.
There's too much attention in your wrist.
That stuff grows like tension mention.
Or wars like mouse hand dissed.
Child three card monty enthusiast.
Running away from three unhappy cures.
He just wants to serve a world.
And provide the best of tours.

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